The article is complete gibberish to someone outside tech, so if the role of the title is to describe the article to its intended audience yours is a lot better.
Of course if you intend to communicate to non-tech people that you write relevant cutting-edge articles, then choosing a title like "Fast and Portable Llama2 Inference on the Heterogeneous Edge" does the job much better. Maybe even add the words sustainable and IoT somewhere.
Of course if you intend to communicate to non-tech people that you write relevant cutting-edge articles, then choosing a title like "Fast and Portable Llama2 Inference on the Heterogeneous Edge" does the job much better. Maybe even add the words sustainable and IoT somewhere.