> New, exciting way of doing online courses
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression
> New, exciting way of doing online courses
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression